Monday, February 2, 2009

A failed story

I was a lonesome lover,

Searching her with hopes undeterred,

Don’t be disheartened what friends would say,

The day of success isn’t a distant away…

With gentle promises in my heart, gave every day a novel start,

Dreamt of caring for her more than self, and would face evils with all the stealth!!!

One day, the remote prospects became an idealistic truth,

Didn’t happen by chance, but we were made for each other’s good,

With bud of love carved on my heart, forever to stay,

The day of success wasn’t anymore a distant away!!!

Overlooked friends n foes, lived in a world reincarnated for her,

We swayed to love till our last breath, and promised to bid a bye together!!!

Dynamics of time flew past at an alarming pace,

Is love a dream or reality, she would pray,

I would hold her hands in my hands,

 “This day of success would last an infinity...”, I would say!!!

But the actions of past, formulated a circuitous future,

With life and love not lasting forever,

I stood waiting, when she was gone one day,

The day of success is no more alive today!!!

                                                                                                A failed love story….

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

great stuff man.

real good!

ra said...

wow gr8 stuff raghav..1 can understand the intensity of pain in each word..

once heart broken..the second becomes a minute and the minute becomes an hour..and the finishin line just remains as "a failed love story!!!"

pooja said...

yeah ..can understand now very well d intensity of pain which one recieve wen his/her love betrayed her/him...:(